Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Untitled by Madison B

The temptation to sin looks so beautiful,
Evil was formed gorgeous,
To draw the weak towards it,
But step back and take a look

Evil causes harm to those we love,
Why lie to someone we care for,
When the truth doesn't hurt as much in the end

We don't think about the results of our decisions,
Why would you cheat?
If you have the most perfect thing in front of you

The easy answer is it is so tempting,
To take the easy way out of things,
Sin looks like a delicious piece of cake,
But what the human eye does not see is the poison that lies inside

With every step we take,
And every move you make,
It is a two way street,
Evil fights good,
The glory goes the one who hurts you

Devil vs God,
We are rooting for the good guy,
But falling into the bad guy's trap

6 comments:

  1. This piece is extremely deep and well written. If I do say so myself, you have a knack for literature.

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  2. I agree with Sam. This piece of writing just sucks you in and makes you keep reading. Do write some more poetry, as you are very good at it. Great Job! BTW, WHO ARE YOU ASA CLARK???????

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  3. today is tuesday. How could this be posted on Wednesday, Sept 29th? AM I MISSING SOMETHING? Hope not

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  4. That was amazing madi i think it sounded like a professional writer wrote it and it was so detailed

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  5. I really enjoyed this piece. I felt it was the truth. Though I don't like to admit it felt like ripping off a banded... the truth. I really liked it and want to hear more from you!

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